There's no other place with quite so many losers.
We're all really Muslims but most of us boozers,
Too.
"Slavery's not dead", said the Bangaalhee.
Rhyming is hard with a word like Bangaalhee,
Oh pooh!
We can hate it or love it,
But can't rise above it,
Like the rest of the world can do.
'cos Male's the place where i was born.
It's not just a coop that this pigeon has flown.
It sometimes gets boring but my heart is torn.
I can't really leave it, I'd rather just moan.
Ooh!
Posing's perfected like an artform in Male'.
Borrowed concepts and words form most of our parlay,
Don't they?
Masood and Khalil and Heena Waleed,
Seezan or Niuma or Ablo Hameed,
Euppey!
You can hate it or love it,
But you've gotta admit it.
This place is so happy and gay.
'cos Male's the place where i wanna be.
It's more than just palm trees, the sun and the sea.
London, New York and KL's not for me.
I don't wanna leave it so please let me be.
Hooray!
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masood and khalil and heena waleed!
yep..there really is a certain ring to it. Poetry straight out of the underbelly Male' this.
Bangalhee rhymes with adalath party
Adhaalath party rhymes with Jahaalth party more fittingly.
exactly man!!!eupey!!haha
hahaha
Thank you for ze laugh
and good poetry o.O
kekekek.. varah salhi ingey :D
This is What I Call CREATIVITY!!!!!
Super KooL :D
keep posting
Posing's perfected like an artform in Male'.
Borrowed concepts and words form most of our parlay,
Don't they?
Masood and Khalil and Heena Waleed,
Seezan or Niuma or Ablo Hameed,
Euppey!
I Love That Rhyme. hehehehe. varah salhi :D
Don't fancy going back, Hamza. Closeted mentalities stifle me.
Anyhoo, u've got nice poetry going there :P
hehehehe Masoodh and Khaleel aah the dynamic duo..now its Ibbe and Nuzair..ibbe by the way is expanding so rapdily pretty soon all of us are going to be forced to by wide screen tv's....
We want you back
Dragonfly, you call that poetry? Creativity? Love the rhyme? Theeez izzz a joke, isn't it? innit? Bin it!
You don't try to force something to rhyme... it just sounds stupid.
This is the worst shit I've seen someone write, poetry or no poetry.
I dunno what that shit he wrote is... doesn't sound like poetry. Could be dog's fart for all I know... makes sense too coz I've no idea how that smells like.
Maybe I'm being too harsh. The guy deserves credit for at least trying. I'm sure he'll improve with time. Heh!
I can see he's trying very hard to liven up his already dead blog. Boring stuff! *yawn*
Yeah Simon, Godzilla and Dragonfly.
I clearly should eat some humble pie.
I needed to be shaken out of my stupor.
Cause my rhymes, they just ain't super.
And now I lay me down to sleep.
Wannabepoet has made me weep.
Hamza you fool, you'll never win that Nobel prize.
At least my dick is pretty outsize. :D
To wannabepoet with love. I may not be creative or a poet but I'm a helluva necromancer. Just see me turn this dead blog into the most bitchin' zombie..uh..blog ever! Love me, love me, oh why won't you love me anonymous commenter!!!
Absolutely pathetic. This guy makes Britney Spears' Oops I Did it Again sound like a Shakesperean masterpiece. That's right, he's done it... again.
It would help if Hamza had better things to do in life than watch every single show on telly like some pimply teenage girl. I can see this chap going really "far" in life. In fact, he has so much useless junk in his head after watching tv all day that he feels the need to come and rant about it on his blog.
What would he do without the Hollywood celebrities and the mediocre American shows? He religiously reads every gossip about Hollywood stars like all bored housewives do.
To justify all his lame behaviour actions he calls himself gay and uncool... he even admits to NOT having a life. This he does in order to make himself feel good because if somebody else says it to him first that would hurt his ego and make him look like a total dork. Insecure li'l baby.
He is very insecure about his weight as well, which is why he tries to laugh it off and make jokes about it.
His favourite website is thesuperficial.com... people who visit such sites are either girls with too much time on their hands or virgin little perverts who can only dream of "those good things" that they can't have. If the guy got pussy he wouldn't be snooping around these sites everyday jacking off to cellulite on celluloid.
love the post
anonlosers: Get a life, obviously you envy hamza- meaning he's got something u dont
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